So you think you can..

by Sapphire   Aug 10, 2005


So you think you can lie to me?
You think you can cheat?
You think you can use me?
Well i don't really think so.

I got more power than you baby,
you must understand this,
I can use you, abuse you,
But I choose not.

I can turn my back on you,
and start using you right back,
and lieing and cheating,
and the whole nine yards.

You must understand this,
you cannot use me,
you hurt me,I hurt you.
its like a big circle.

I show you respect,
and I treat you well,
let this be a warning,
for you to never disrespect me.

*vote/comment please*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Thanks but what I was trying to do was get my point across i have my own style of writing poetry, its probably not the right way, but thats just how I wrrite my poems, thanks for the comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    this poem is okay in my opinion. it is a bit too conversational, and there is a definite lack of poetic language and you don't seem to use many metaphors, although there is a simile here and there. overall, this poem is bent too much on getting across a message and doesn't have enough focus on the sorts of things that more commonly define poetry, such as meter, rhythm, symbolism, metaphor, etc.

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