Cool air

by Andrea broken tears   Aug 10, 2005


Its a dark night the
sky is grey
theres a chill in the
air.
I can smell the sweet smell
of rain
I'm alone
relaxed,yet so sad
I lay here on my bed
writing this as im
drifting in and out of
sleep.
I can feel the cool air
wash over my body
as it comes through the
open window.
It puts me to sleep
I think of you as
the cool air runs down
me,like your fingers
running down my back.
The sweet song of the
wind in the trees,like your
voice telling me you love me.
I lay here peaceful
without a word or movement
and let the cool air
lift me away from the pain
I fall asleep with thoughts
of you as the cool air
comes through my
window.

**This is mostly true **
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  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    superb poem! 5/5 :) glad that it didnt mention anything negative, thnx again 4 ur comments :) mean allot

    love mark xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by JamesP

    it was very good i could tell that it was from experience. 5/5

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