I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! It's ur a really great writer and I mean it it's realyy nice! MAKE PART 2 as soon as you can much luv peace out bye!

Oh yeah I forgot 5/5

i really like that:) it almost made me cry, it really reminds me of myself good job:)

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DUDE THATS SO TRUE AYE THATS ONE AWESOME POEM
I KNOW HOW IT FEELS ABOUT A GIRL THAT LIVES SO FAR AWAY N U THINK OF HER EVERYDAY TIL SHE IN YOUR LIFE

omy god this poem is exactly how i feel about my ex boyfriend your really good

this is a very good poem! 5/5 if you get a chance...plez rate and comment on my poems! thank you!

leanna

wonderful poem, very heartfelt. i can relate to what you are feeling now.. please check out my poems, also.

wow breathtaking i LOVED this poem i just went through almost the same thing i hope things work out ill be waiting for part 2 good luck!! keep up the Excellent work 5/5!!!

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Gabs

Nice poem very deep and sweet. Keep up the good work.

good stufff!!
i feel u..
to love is to let go..

wow that is beautiful! brought a tear to my eye! i feel you on that poem! great job! 5!

aww....thats so cute i know i lost someone i love because i live far from him now i miss him so much....Great Job!!!!!

ncie job!

Just wanna let you know that I think your poem is great! Nice Job...hope you keep writing!

this is a realy good poem i love it lots you have great skill keep it up!!
5/5

i love your poem...that's the way i feel right now about my ex but still there's a part of me that still hates him for everything he did to me...im all confused..anyways...keep it up!!!

What can i say...what a wonderful poem i'm telling u dud keep doing that job okay and i cant wait to read part 2 by!!

Mahamed G!

OMG!! i love it!! i need part 2, pleaz!! keep writting bc i need ur poems to help me get through my stupid life!
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Kristen

OMG THIS IS AN AWSOME POEM WELL IF UR EVER GONNA POST PART 2 LET ME KNOW CO I CAN READ IT!!

this was great. i was about to cry. it's relly too bad you wontt be posting part 2. i was looking foward to it