Hold on!!

by Jacob M Parnell   Aug 11, 2005


Hold on she shouted!
Your going to make it through.
But the words were doubted.
And eventually wernt true.
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Stay with me she screamed!
Its not your time to go.
It wasnt like I had dreamed.
It didnt go by so slow.
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We are almost there!
She frantically yelled, your not going to die!
I could see a tear.
Hanging in her eye.
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I glared up.
Into my "hero's" face.
To see closeup.
The last person I would embrace.
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She held my hand.
My sight now gone.
Now only listening, hoping she would understand.
Why it was my life I had to make foregone..
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The sirens where blaring.
On that lonely night.
One woman caring.
And I put up no fight....

JP (C) --Copyright-- 2005

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  • 17 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Really moving... great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessy

    A-men on this poem. .. Love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Iflookscouldkill

    Hey I really like your poem!!!Keep writing,it's deep and sad!!A+++.

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    by Wasted Fake Smiles

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    Your work continues to amaze me. This poem is effing awesome, I love it!

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