Very intense full of many different emotions! I think this poem is a little different than your usual. You're showing more feeling and you can really feel sadness and anger! Take Care! Brooke~

Wow. Your Poems Are Amazing!! Theres nothing I would Change Different About It. And Theres Nothing I Can Do To Try To Help The Poem, Because Its Already At Its Best! Like I Already Said In Your Latest Poem, You're Very Good At Putting Your Emotions Into Words, And It Lets Readers Feel How Your Feeling.. and Its Really Cool How You Do That.. Most Writers Cant Relate To their readers, but you can!

By your side? Or on my own?
I'll leave you a constellation prize,
you've won second place in my heart.
Does that mean anything to you anymore?
If it does, you’re only second best.

^^ thats my favorite part. :D Keep up the good work! :D
Love Always-
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OMG.. that was gr8.. i loved it.. ur 2 last stanzas wer absolutely ingenious.. "you've won second place in my heart" and "last man standing, is the one who lies best".. that was a touch of magic.. lol.. but it reli touched me.. i usually prefer rhyme, but this one is way off better w/o it.. hope ur ok now..
thnx 4 sharing
keep p the talent
love
nouna

great poem. it was so full of emotion. amazing job. keep it up!
and thanks for the comment on my poem.
crystal

Pretty good. It's so depressing, though. I liked you're last line:"Last man standing, will be the one who lies best." Sad, but true.

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! 5/5!

'I know what I am, I can't say the same for you.'
very strong, and can be interpreted in different ways, very good! love it!
'Last man standing, will be the one who lies best.'
another strong line. good job! i enjoyed it!

Emotional, It didnt rhyme but was eayto read.

there is alot of feelings in this and the words in some lines were very well written.

I enjoyed reading it, it was very sad and powerful well done :D

wow.....thats all i have 2 say.....

Great poem... I also wanted to know if u'd better comment on 'perfection'. U said u don't like perfection poems...what do u mean by that...the poem is about how my dad expects me to be perfect and I would rather die then be who he wants me to be...just asking..

thanks
Kayla xoxo

This poem is great, not only did you express yourself extremely well but also made the rreader feel those emotions

Great job on this poem. It was written well and has a good meaning.

This kinda confused me, At first I thought it was about a girl, But then I thought it was about a friend? Ohwell, It was still good. And I liked how you asked those questions, Tis was goooood! 5/5

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