Wow Darien I am really sorry for what happened to you. I have said before you deserve to have someone who treats you right. I hope one day you find her. This poem is really sad and full of strong emotion! Hang in there! Brooke~

This was a really strong poem.. Sorry if this happened to you in real life. But you're really good with explaining your emotions. However, the paragraph is a little bit long, and some readers might take a look at it and not want to read it. If you add more spaces, maybe it would look more flattering to the readers? You dont have to do it, it was just a thought :)
-Cant Wait To Read More :)

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i thot it was gud.. all that emotion and hate.. she mustve messed u up pretty bad.. but i can see u already on ur feet :D.. thats gud.. i just loved ur last line..
keep goin
take care
nouna

Your poetry has taken a depressing turn lately. It's obvious that you were hurt by someone close. It shows. Beautiful work, as usual.

Wow, sounds like your going threw alot of pain rite now. Sumtimes I just wish i would close my eyes wake up and it was all a dream! I know the feelings you have for that person because they got the best of me also. Well anyways i loved the poem i could easily relate . 5/5

very evil, though a scence of wanting justice. pretty good. freewriting, lol, i know exactly what you mean. i do that a lot.

The poem was very good tho i do hope it's not true. when some one hruts you be the bigger person tho it may hurt like hell. show that your strong by moving on and i know easer said then done. keep up the amazing work. 5.5

This poem is really great. A lot of emotion. Perfect words. I can really feel your hurt.

Thank you for being so sweet.
Tiffany.xox.

"I hope your's die"
not sure what it was referring to. If you mean you hope her heart will die, then it'd be:
"I hope yours dies"
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I didn't like the repitition of 'game' close to the end of the poem. Beyond that, I thought it was a pretty fun ride of emotion, though some of it was more brutal than I'd ever admit to in a poem.