Wow great job.. its evident how much he means to you.. So i hope everything works out.. But great job with your poem it was absolutly amazing.. had the perfect flow and rhyme scheme great job 5/5 ~ xox brit xox

Great poem please take a look at some of my poems!!

Wow! why do people not comment on this one? it is wonderful!!! I loved the way the words flowed and the way the story unfolded....*5/5*
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This is such a great poem. I really felt the emotion in the poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5
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Jess

This was a good poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5
xoxoxo
Jess