Kill me alive....

by DANI   Aug 11, 2005


I'm in another mood for making my point,
ill speak my mind till I'm in the ground,
but ill make my words pass down through my generations,
clouds stormy up ahead,
rain lashing at my face like blades,
i ain't mad,
I'm just painting a picture,
someone said I'm obsessed with this poem writing,
if i stop the writing,
i will start fighting,
make my mind rip in half,
this tormented mind is going to blow,
I'm gonna stay quite though,
Ive had my say in life,
its time for me to deal with it myself,
but then i see what Ive done,
and i notice all my loved ones,
i need to be gone,
I'm only 14 with so much on my mind,
why cant someone else feel like me,
i feel like I'm being killed alive....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Keri

    Oh ya, i use poetry to help get out how i feel cos if i dont write for a while i keep everything inside and eventually it eats away at me and messes my head up so there really is nothing at all wrong with that! whoever told u that probably doesnt understand hey? x

  • 18 years ago

    by Keri

    Hey i really enjoyed readin your poem 5/5 from me, and if u ever need anyone to talk to im always ready to listen. :) take care hun and be strong xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by tea lady

    someone said your obsessed??? there's nothing wrong with gettin what you wanna say out n poems seem like a great way to do it,5/5

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