Enhancement of the Mind.

by Renee   Aug 11, 2005


Dissolving the black & white of this world,
into the pastels of my imagination
combined through enhancement,
enhancement of the mind.

As the smoke unfurls from my lips,
my mind is replaced with a blank sheet
swirls are traced with my fingertips
and none of the ends meet.

The drawings become animated
and my world floats above it all
I look out these glass walls that confine me,
listening in on others conversations,
but not listening at all.

-*-I didn't have a good title for this one.-*-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    beautiful!!!!! you're very talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Hans Fausto

    brings out the creativity :p

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    Good poem, but something about it was a little off, perhaps the way I choose to read it, not quite sure, sorry:/

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Correct: mean*

    Sorry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    I find this amazingly written. Truly beautifully spoken. Though, I'm not sure I quite get the message, like, what it's about. To me it feels like you're refering to how things are on drugs, but I fear I'm by far wrong...and I don't quite see where this relates to nature...but like I've told you, I'm not much a clever one. :-). I will continue to read this over and over till I get a good idea what you mena, then I'll comment again. :-) <3 Love you.

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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