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by reality Aug 11, 2005
Love, romance /
I was searching for a happiness
The kind to set me free,
You came along and lifted me up
You showed me how gentle love could be.
I am grateful for the love you show
The way you make me feel,
I used to see you in my dreams
But I know now you are real.
When our lips meet in a kiss
It's a moment lost in time,
A complete and wholesome feeling,
That completely blows my mind.
I believe I have found my happiness
Having you here with me,
As I turn to look into your loving eyes,
I can see eternity.
I must say. Your peom has made a lot of sense. Your use of words really bring it all together. THe tone is just so perfect. I congratulate you on this piece of work. Job well done :)
by TRAGiC BEAUTY
THiS iS S0000 SWEET! KKEP iT UP!
Thank yall for the comments
I love it. Keep it up!
thanks alot its on of my first poems
i will be sure to rate your poems and comment