Wow Robert, that was really good. And i hope that you do become that of which you desire ever so much.

Love, Jennifer.

Hey robert, this was brilliant.
I loved the way you wrote it.
you're really talented.
wish you the best,
marjan

Great job!

Yo good poem i like it

Very good! This poem is definetely unique! I love the way you used the word average. my dreams are different though, i someday want to be more than average, not that theres anything wrong with it:P but very cute poem.

Ana*

Wow, robert
i really like this. but hey, u dont have to be average, ur an awesome poet and artist.
just be all u can be and dont let ur talent go to waste.
hey, good luck!!! we're all in it togther.
hope to read more, hugs and kisses,
*rachel

Just beautiful....keep up the great job...you're just awsome my friend, you have lots of talent! Take care 5/5

Good job,5/5
luves4eva