My world.. !! fiction

by Cynthia--Nasr   Aug 12, 2005


In my make believe world, everything is fine.
Memories are forgotten- just another waste of time.

In my vivid thoughts, nothing ever comes true.
My dreams are hopeless and it's all because of you.

In my weakest moments you always turn away.
Desert me here in my deepest dooms.

In my heart, there’s nothing but emptiness inside.
My heart is broken, left with no place to reside.

In my reality world I’ll walk right over you.
I’ll stab you in the back- just like you always do

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    5/5 all the way!!! Sorry it took so long to review one of poems. I kind of forgot about this site a little. ^-^; My memory is going a little lately.

    But I really love it! You're really good!! Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Well done. This poem has great emotion in it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kandi

    Wow u r a very good poet... you should get ur poems publish.... they're good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    I really loved that. Speachless actually...
    5.5 for sure x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    Hey,
    Great Poem.
    Your An Awesome Writer.
    Take Care.

    >> Tear Stained Face

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