The Broken Heart and I (sublim. msg.)

by Daniel J   Aug 12, 2005


I gathered up that broken heart,
Left folorn through stromy night,
Or the rude sun-rays which make the day;
Vanquished through repulse by she,
Evidentaly hurt and sad was he,
Yet their pride had stepped between,
Onto the fore, where it should've never been.
Until now my thoughts had been,
Such that only I could see,
Oh, how wish I to confide in one,
Who what to do would know.
I now hold that heart within my hands,
Thicker now you see, with hurt. So I
Held it near and close to me,
And sheltered it from stromy night;
Like that for many days we sat,
Like that I was sat alone,
My heart still sat within my hands.
Yes, how love cuts deep within,
How it you can hurt and maim,
Easily so, so be warned one and all,
And take my case as example cruel,
Recall now dear, how love like pain can sear, for
The very deepest love, leaves the very deepest scars.
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(C) D.J 2005+

There is a subliminal message in the poem above.
Starting from the second line, the third word on every
line is part of a subliminal message, excluding 3 lines
which serve to seperate the message into different
sentences. The first line is the initial letters read
downwards. It is the most complex subliminal message I have written in a poem to date. It reads:

I love you so with all my heart,
Through rude repulse and pride,
My only wish['s] to hold you near,
For I still love you so my dear.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Oh my God Daniel, thats impressive! I can't even imagine the time and effort that took. That is true talent right there, amazing.