Heya,

that was a great poem! it sorta had a story behind it but let you use your imagination.
I loved the use of words and the flow was great!

well done x)

this is sooo gud.. i loved it from A-Z.. it was pretty dark.. i loved this line :"if he cant have their respect, he'll earn their fears" that was jus gr8.. nice rhyme and wonderful use of words..
keep it ups.. u got my 5
take care
nouna

omg guys srry...i cut off some of it ill fix it asap!

there ...its fixed :)

wow awesome poem! I absolutely loved it! keep up the great work... and thxs for the comments