Comments : Not how it should have ended

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacinator

    Oh my, great poem.. but suicide isn't the answer...i gave it a 5

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is amazing! i have kind of done the same thing too...just staring at it and stuff...but i hope you never do that, you seem like an awesome person..keep ur head up..thanx for commentin on my poemz, meanz a lot to me..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by hunter

    I going to be honest i have done pills in the past that i have end up in the hospital for over doses and i would talke it back so i would never make a dission of suside i been there. so i gave it a 5

  • 18 years ago

    by hunter

    This a Great poem! I love because i been throught the same thing. There is so much in life to lose And so much to gain. But you don't know if its worth while. But in the end you relize it is.
    sincerly
    Hunter

  • 18 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Wow, i totally relate to it, i've been there before. i hope your doing better now. And if not, well don't worry things do get better. in the end it gets better, and if not then its not the end. take care. xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by x. Sleeping Beauty .x

    Great poem.. Its really deep and full of emotion.. good work.
    5/5
    -YouWillAlwaysBeMyKonstantine-
    x x o x

  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    Good poem!! ive been there before too and it wasnt what i wanted either!! keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy

    Wow..this is a really sad poem, its also very good though:) great job, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by hunter

    Yeah hrburrow@yahoo.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Meme

    Very sad..but really touching

  • 17 years ago

    by .:NOT.so.STRONG:.

    Wow...that was really great! It really made me think, n i like that. Thanx much for the comments on my poems....keep up the great work!
    Much Love - RAI.

  • 17 years ago

    by AllCutUp

    Wow
    Totalli awesumm
    5/5 deffinetly.
    Take care
    ~AllCutUp~

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda?!

    Wow, its so real.

  • 17 years ago

    by kida

    Omg that is sad but i dont think it is da best written poem i have eva read but it is good keep up da good work n u will get betta also i like da heart dat fills dis it almost makes a picture in my mind.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    That was great... i have been there... i've ova dosed many times n came close once... then i realised wat i have... its not worth it. but i can totally relate to it. 5. it was excellent!
    great work :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    I like it... :) but the whole in the depths of despair vibe can really give a person the heebie-jeebies. :) No worries, though. Great job.