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really good poem, keep it up your awesome.
thank you for the comment.

This poem is my fav. (not saying i dont like the others) but this one is a 5/5 to keep up the good work your a very talented writer good job.

Wow that was gorgeous its a great poem idea and you can relate alot of things to a trail like you did

Another lovely piece from your little trail series. Nicely done, again.

10th line: Your's - *Yours

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Excellent! You broke a lot of sentances, but in this case it's ok, I love the uniquiness in this poem, great job! 5/5