Plz leave some comments, it is my first poem and I want all kinds of criticism and thoughts or watever...thankies :) hopeyou enjoy it

ooooh i like this one =D

NICE POEM....THATS REALLY GREAT TO READ...I READ IT TWICE CASUE OF IT'S EXCELLENCE.....I LOVE THIS POEM.......LATER

-JESUS CRISIS-

Hey steph! I love this poem, but how come you don't post any of your other ones up? You have so many good ones! Share your talent girl! Great job though, i'm so proud of you *hugs* I hope this year goes better than last. Lots of love, Asha

Great job, ' got throw and ' got a constent flowing story. Poetic in all senses. :D

Terrific poem, Steph. The flow was great and I love the way you expressed yourself here. This was my favorite part: "For it started out simply
that i was afraid to fall
I didn't want to love you
but your my greatest love of all..."

Nicely done! And thank you for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot:)

OMG steph!!! you are awesome!! sorry it took so long to comment things have been quite hectic! this is so good though!!! 5/5

much love,
sammi xxx

Hey gurl dat was really gwd n sweet...n to me i felt the expression in the poem...does dat make sence?anywya yeh great work babe...keep it up

This poem is good...and so sorry your fear has finally come true...hope you can make it through...

I knew I wasn't good enough
I always knew you deserved more
but in this dream i felt the pain
as you walked out the door...

You are a lovely poet. (when I say lovely, i mean lovely like your poems are great to read and lovely like you Love Love) Keep on writing! I want to read more!

~Anthony

I loved this poem alot! my greatest fear was to loose my gf! and in the end i did! well i gave her another chance and she ruined it again! well life is life, and we all need to accept it in the end!!!

nice poem btw! you have the talent! the words flowed and everything was great@