awww...

I looooove this <3

"hate is all i know
anger is all i feel
introduce me to this thing you call love
and show me a way to live without wanting to die"

There are quite a few people who could use someone to do that for them... *still admires your talent*

xxx

Very beautiful. You made me feel envelopped in the words of your song. Very nice :)
-A

"show me a heart that never bleeds
and i will show you the love that was once lost beneath my eyes"

wow thats my favorite line!

omg this is your newest and one of your greatest yet! Its beautiful...darkness and love together, i lovelovelove it! keep it up 5/5! hope to here from u soon....did i mention how much i love this poem;) lol
<3 stray