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It was awsome. I really liked it. It remindsme of when i dissapear into my room and work on my story. |
by ASPHYXIATED
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I really enjoyed reading this!! |
by Victoria
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Interesting and different but very good keep on writing! |
by Kalika
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Truly unique. I liked, and thought it was very original, how you began it as a none rhyming poem, and than changed it towards the end. Creative. Very interesting poem, it definately deserved a five. Keep writing! |
by fallen angel
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an original poem. i loved reading it. you are good at writing poems, keep it up. xxx |
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very creative I have never heard anything like this ever before. ~5~ |
by Liz
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thats such a cool poem! i could picture it so well! Keep up the good work! plz read mine and comment aswell |
by XxTeArSxX17
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Wow gr8 job your really good keep it up 5/5 |
by Marjan
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Hey, I loved the way you wrote this one. and the title is very good too |
by None
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Hmm...quite interesting...I liked this part, |
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Omg i think this is the first poem i have seen on this website that wasnt pathetic or whinging or corny! congrats. |
by Michael
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"I never submit my poems because they r bad," MY FOOT! How could u not submit a poem like this!? ITS JUST PLAIN INSANE! But really good...luving it... |
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I love this is sounds like a song or something. I really do like and i would like to read more. great writing. |
by Paige
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Fantastic....i love the way that the nothingness seems to control everything....so true to life. Well done, a brilliant piece of work. |
by cuppycake
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0.o i liked it, very interesting...and i like the title alot...good choice of words. |
by Kendall
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NIIICE |
by Angel
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Wow - nothing more to say.... |
by BloodScars
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Wow....thats alot of somthing considering the titles called nothing ^_^ anyway great job 5/5 |
by NannO
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Interesting and very unique.. it deinitely stood out...i lyk how u twisted the"nothing" into a fantastic "something".. |
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WoW!! this was DEEP. |