I feel ya

All my pointless writing about nothing
About nothing about nothing about nothing
this really adds to the element of the poem since it is specifically 'about nothing'.
oops, I already critiqued this didn't I? it's starting to sound familier...sorry!

Creative and unique. I really enjoyed this and I can relate to how you feel. Good job:)

Very, very interesting..... Definately one of those brain rattling poems. It was new and cool.

And please write something more

You have a great way with words, natural poet i reckon... off to read some more....

I can relate so much to this poem, the words you use are so specific...I can see the four-walled space of expression in my head when i read it.
Fabulous!

I realy understand what you were trying to say
and I got it all

Great job.. i loved it! thats a good topic to write about... nothing... totally caught my eye and i read it and it was brutally good. very nice work keep it up.

I really enjoyed this, I like how you have structured it in a way that lets you write freely without needing to conform it to a rhyme or rhythm. The topic is interesting, though on the surface it seems to be about nothing, as you read on you can see the deeper meaning within. Excellent write.

Very good. You took a different topic and made it into an excellent poem! Great job!

All my pointless writing about nothing
About nothing about nothing about nothing

^ My favorite lines, because of the way you kept repeating "about nothing". Wonderful writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie