Cracked Walls

by Falling Up   Aug 15, 2005


Do you ever wonder,
why the sky's so blue?
Do you ever wonder,
what i think of you?

Have you ever counted
all the stars up in the sky?
have you ever smiled,
at all the times that I've said hi?

what am i missing?
I'm just as good as her.
I wish i had what she has..
What does she have?
I'm unsure.

And all the things I've ever lacked,
all the sudden come rushing back.
As the sky turns to Grey,
Ruining my blue day.
When i saw you holding hands,
my heart had felt astray.

Do you ever wonder,
what i think of you?
I know you never wonder.
I wonder though, i do.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Wow i can perfectly relate to it
    i loved it

    . . . p i l i

  • 18 years ago

    by donut

    Wow! i really liked your poem, it's so touching and i can relate to that feeling. keep it up! thank you for rating my poems, it means a lot to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Nice work...shows what happens when the one you want is with someone else and you start doubting yourself and wondering why it couldn't be you, and how it could be different and what's going through his mind...

    "what am i missing?
    I'm just as good as her.
    I wish i had what she has..
    What does she got?
    I'm unsure."

    Might sound better as "What does she have? I am not sure." Sometimes it is better to write out the contractions...anyway, good work.

    xxx

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