Pain

by ABrookeD   Aug 16, 2005


I fall to my knees
My energy drained out
I wait there
Staring at the ground
My heart races faster
Every second i breath
My thoughts all going at once
I cant think, i cant see
My eyes shut
Another moment passes on
I hit the ground
As two seconds go by
In a blink of an eye
Life has passed me by

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  • 14 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    No more can i add. But shortpoem but full of emotion. Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Nice poem

    but the ending was amazing and scary

    loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Nice describtion and a nice poem. it's really scary when that momnet comes

    note: if you could check my "pain" i will be happy

  • 17 years ago

    by natalie

    I really like this. It's short, but still makes the reader want to keep reading. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Suffering Soul

    Awsome poem! i think its so cool that you're into God, so many people wont admit that!

    Catcha lata!

    Andrea

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