She's Taken My Place

by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~   Aug 16, 2005


She struts in, taking my place,
Dressed to impress you, pretty in lace,
Running her fingers through your hair,
You give her that compassionate stare.

You’re doing to her what was special to me,
I see your hand trace above her knee,
This is too much for me witness,
As I imagine you removing her dress.

Hidden in the corner, I try to understand,
This isn’t the way I had it planned,
Somehow I believed we’d be together again,
I never thought I would feel this pain.

In a room full of friends, I feel so alone,
Without you, my past paradise is unknown,
My emotions are crazy, my heart is bare,
All in love and war is defiantly not fair.

From my glassy eyes escapes a tear,
Behind closed eyes, flashes appear,
There’s a glimpse of you and me, mesmerised,
Once captured by loves blue skies.

Forced to reality, I can see her gazing up at you,
Her eyes cut across the room, as if she knew,
Trembling, I melt into the wall,
The room is spinning, I can feel myself fall.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats awesome, i think i like that one the best,
    KUDOS TO YOU :)

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    wow! i know how you feel! i felt like throwing up when i saw my ex with his someone new! i hated that she knew how much it hurt me cause i couldnt hold back the tears! great job! 5! check out some of mine, thanx

  • 18 years ago

    by SmIlEbAcKtHeTeArS

    hey
    this is an awesome poem...i know how u feel hang in there

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    nice poem=)
    i like the way u expressed it
    if could.. pls check out my poems
    thanx and smile always