HAHAHA It seemed so serious! I knew it was going to be funny as it's in the funny category but ....well....that's just funny! It really was so beautifully written...until the last sentence of course. lol .....Very good!! It flowed perfectly and had a great twist! A happy twist I'd say...;)

hehe very cute/funny. I loved the ending tho it was a surprise one lol, and different is a good thing sometimes! But anyways great job keep up the great work. 5/5

At first I thought it was sad and then the ending was great! LMAO~ Loved it! I have written a new one a bit different than my usual sad and dark poems. It's called My Sole Inspiration. Take Care! Brooke~

umm... i din reli think it that funny.. but ur rhyme was gud and the flow was gr8.. i loved ur expression..
keep it up .. thumbs up 4 a first time :)
nannoush

Made me laugh. I like it.

that was great! you got me laughing out loud, wich i rarely do from reading. the ryming scheme was quite cunning, good job.5/5

thought this was really funny...wasnt expectin that last line lol

lol nice. ur a pretty good writer. keep it up.

haha this was a funny and good poem

your a ho3 =P j/k

Hey great job i loved the twist at the end lol...
-take care
-BrokenSmile

HAHAHA! Nice twist to it! Keep it up! 5/5

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

Your poem is mad nice.its hot.keep up the good work

Excellent poem! It got me at the end, i was like "awww" and then.. "oh hahahaha" :P 5!!

I really thought it was serious then had a great laugh when i got to the end! So Good!!

Angel XX

Great Ending I really was wondering why it was under funny, I got at the end, Keep it up!

Lmao...veru nice 5/5

Interesting to say the least.

Haha...I remember reading this a while ago, but I was too lazy to comment or vote.

Psst...I think God is making me pay by reading your poems. =)

This poem was very serious in the beginning and then you lighten the mood was the last line. Made me laughed a second time, so you're worth this comment.

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Hahahaz. . .* That's great! I love it! I started to read it and I was wondering why it was in tyhe humor section but now I see! Great job! You are an ExCeLlEnT writter!

xCoNfUsIoNx

Haha verry cute ending...I would've probably added a couple more stanzas though to build suspense but great job otherwise. 4/5

joy*:.xx