Sweet Sixteen

by the middle   Aug 16, 2005


Sweet sixteen, who ever said that was true?
no one who has ever loved or loved you,
could believe that sixteen is ever sweet,
but maybe i'm just too easily beat.

had a dream of us last night, why must you haunt me?
can't seem to forget the way we used to be.
but that's all changed now, you've found someone new,
someone who's better fitting with you.

but why her? of all the girls you could choose,
why my best friend? i feel so used.
was this your intention all along?
how could i have been so wrong?

sweet sixteen, thought i didn't care,
thought i would be fine, didn't need you there.
but as it turns out i knew nothing at all,
cause i miss you, i miss us, i miss it all.

But now i believe myself when i say it's okay,
and i know that i will see darker days.
and now i know that the saying is true,
and sixteen can be sweet with or without you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    OMG that was so good...o my daisy is so talented!!!
    i miss you so much hun you have no idea!! although it doesn't feel like you're really gone!!
    love you,
    banana x x x
    PS: (poem was awesome..thanks for the comment...made my day:P)

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Oh that really stinks. I feel bad for you! but I'm glad you aren't letting this jerk ruin your life. Good poem 5/5