aww hun, this is so sad, yet excellent!! keep it up!
-xXx-

Wow Car, so full of emotion and written so beautifully. Tell him or let him read this.........

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Beautiful poem, Car, as Angela said if you can't tell him give him this beautiful poem......
hugs, love, Ann

wow! That poem is so full of emotion! It's a great poem! Well worth 5/5. You should check out my poem and tell me what you think.

Interesting... well written, 5/5

Keep it up : )

♥Niki

Anticipation of love from someone that doesn't know it, is an emotion that really needs a name given to it. It is a mixture of sadness, lust, yearning and being scared. I would like to call it, "What The @#$!"

Pete

Very nice poem, Foxy. I loved the last stanza. The flow was great and I could feel the sparks ignite. Great job:)

Great poem!!!!!
Keep up the good work!

I really liked it, good job