Perfect Angel lost his wings

by renee Turner   Aug 16, 2005



When i first met you it seemed
like you could fly
A perfect angel and if felt like
you came and saved me
I thought at a young age my tender eyes
couldn't see what love could turn out to
be. The story started good
and then it all started to change

you never called anticipating
like I'm not your girl at all
I fell like I'm Ashanti singing
rain on me

but if you don't want me please
let me and my heart be
cause with out you is maybe the
best thing for me

I think i was wrong cause being
with you is like being in a sad love
song. It's funny how thing can seem
to flip change

how can this be the boy that i felt i
would give me all to can't even seem
to find the time to call me
Has me in tears of laughter
cause i realized love ain't the fairytale
it seems to be

Why was I blinded i should have
seen the dog you turned into be
funny i know, but know I'm not blind
anymore and my perfect angel has
taken off his wings

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Renee, a beautiful emotions penned you potray here, flowed so well ended, keep them coming and thanks for your nice comment, have a good day.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hey, me again:P umm I was just wondering if you could do me a favor.. you commented on one of call A tale of love: Adam's fault.. and a wrote a second one call A tale of love: Eve's fall if you could read it it would mean alot to me

    Thanks
    Love jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Nice work! Loves a huge pain in the butt!:P but it seems thats what the ideas of life are tied to, Somewhere out there your "the one" is waiting for you. Keep that in mind:) If you don't mind reading some of my poems that would be awesome:)

    Pure silence

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