Mystery of the Trivial Rose

by ~DyingBlackRose~   Aug 17, 2005


As you closed in around me,
My body became cold and numb,
Everything went dark,
And everything in my room changed.

My walls was covered in blood,
My body was now blue from the coldness that you have put me in.
My floor wasn't brown but a very pale red that kept getting darker.
But something stood out to me.......

The real rose that was givin' to me from the love of my life was still there.
It didn't change colors.
It didn't die.
It with held everything that was going on.

I heard someone whisper.
It sounded like a death spell to end my life and everybody that loved me.
I fell asleep crying afraid that I wouldn't wake up again.
But I woke up the next morning and again found something unique about the rose............

The rose was still red.
It looked like nothing happened.
I picked up the rose and felt something that I have never felt before.
I felt the love that he has for me and all the feelings and thoughts he has about me.

I fell to the floor holding the rose.
Amazed at what I just felt.
Was I dreaming or was this reality.
Could this be true was the question running though my mind.

I forced myself off the floor.
Looked at everything in my room.
The walls was still covered in blood.
And the floor was darker then it was when I fell asleep.

What happened last night?
Why was everything messed with except that one red rose that didn't die out of the others that was giving to me by other people.
What does it mean and why was it me?
And what will happen to me now?
All these questions was running through my mind all at once.

But then it literally hit me.
The rose didn't die, because he loves me more than his own life.
And I didn't die, because the rose protected me from the spell.
And the thoughts of me from him helped keep me here.

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~Thanks Death Maiden for the title. I know it's my choice. but I couldn't think of anything.~

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Interesting indeed...I wouldn't exactly say a dark poem, but a mixture of dark and great love. You have a way with words and I must say, I love the background to the story. :) -5-

  • 18 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    I have no inkling of what it is you should call your poem I think that is for you to decide as you are the writer
    But I was thinking perhaps in can be called "Mystery of the Trivial Rose." Is cony but the only one I could think of.
    Your writing here is a beautifully dark write and a pleasure to read.
    Take heed and goodluck to you and your writings.