i love it like i love you, my love!

awww hun, that's amazing!!! i love when you say

"the teacher looked on with tears in her eye
and then the young girl looked up at her
and said "daddy wants me to die"

...that was so sad. keep up the great work!
-xXx-

thats the longest poem I ever read but it has to be the best, I liked it alot, i thought it was very good and very sad, you are extremely talented, good job, 5/5

OMiGoSh HuN! tHiS pOeM wAs ToTaLlY aWeSoMe! I aLmOsT cRiEd! ThIs PoEm WaS a ReAl TeAr-JeRkER! NeWaYz 5/5 On ThIs BrIlLiAnT mAsTeRpIeCe!!
-eLiZaBeTh-

WOOOOOOOOOOO that was freaky but it was really i mean really really good poem. its really sad if u need sum1 to talk to u can talk to me.
kristen

I like it too..it is very good..great job..check out my poems when u can..please..great job again...5/5...

xoxoxoxoxoxoxo,
Crystal

WOW this is one of the deepest poems I every read. I was enjoyable from beginning to end.

God Bless

Nice poem, keep up the good writing! Kinda long thou. :x

Gawd I cried when I read that. Gawd I hope that never happens to anyone. Keep up the good work, I'm giving you a 5.

Wow that gave me the chills...i sure hope it's not a true story..though i'm positive things like that have happened. anyways, this is a great poem i give it 5/5, keep it up!
Christina

5/5
I LOVE IT!!! It it is just awesome. You are right too people should believe it when someone tells them something and they have proof like that. It ends up like this most of the times because some people out there just don't believe people ecspecially kids. I feel sorry for this little girl in this poem. The teacher was so nice to her and she made that girl the center of her world and then it all got ripped away....so sad....tear jerker alight.

Keep it up. You're a great poet.

Great job!! Very sad poem!! Very good point/message tho..ppl should always pretend that they are speaking to a person as if they will never see them again. Great job!! Keep writing!! 5/5

Hey i really likde your poem good job 5/5

Wow this is a wonderful poem
sooo sad
5/5

Its good
well written

Its good
well written

That was a GREAT poem. It was worth reading even though it was long. that is a favorite now. you are right about police not believing at times. you used truth in it. which is good. that was great.

That was amazing and so sad. I liked it a lot.There were some grammar mistaked in there. I just think you should know that but overall it was and awesome poem and you should keep writing.

That was GREAT i am not going to steal it but i am going to print it off thank you

This poem is so good it is really sad but has a very important message
5/5
take care

holly