Monsters Under My Bed

by Kendall   Aug 18, 2005


Silently peering beyond the soft cloud lifting my head
Down the golden road that leads under my bed
I hear the monsters professing my name
There's and green one and white one, which is to blame?
I'm afraid to descend down the road, off my cloud
For my decisions have been unwise, I'm not so proud.
The monsters have taken a hold of my body and mind
The day I walk those bright steps into the sky
Can only be told in a matter of time.

The last three lines dont work together and I cant figure out how to make them work. Ideas would be greatly appreciated.

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  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey i liked the poem the way it was!! it was really good i thought!! keep up the good work and stay strong!! bye bye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... i looooooove it!!! it's original. you could try

    "My mind and body are held by the demons under my bed.
    It is only but a matter of time
    Before I walk those bright steps leading to the sky."

    ... for the last three lines... amazing poem!! keep it up!
    -xXx-

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