Hey,
good poem!
kristen

Wow.. good poem, 5/5

AWW! So GREAT!! i totally understand the innocence of this poem. Very well written and thanks so much for your comments!

Ana*

I liked the poem and i can totally relate to alot of your poems :)

Wow...I think this is the best poem I've read of yours so far. Good Job.

This is like the loss of innocence theme, and it brings a clear message, nice job! might want to put in periods so we know when a you're starting a sentance or complete thought or ending one.4/5

So so so very true i loved it xxx 5/5