Hunni poems don't alwayz have to rhyme that one is brilliant!!!!
i love it!!!
luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

Awsome poem. and you are right no one should have to go through that.
and not all poems rhyme.

love snowboots.

Hey thanx 4 every 1 sayin that poems dont have 2 rhyme makes me like my poem a little bit more thanx x x xsexcbishx x x

It was a great poem. People should write about these things to let ppl know that if they are being abused in any way they should stop. Keep up the good work.

Dis is frm 1of sexcibish m8s, nice poem hope it neva appens 2any1 i no specially not u lee lee!!!!! lun ya!!!!

Thank you

It seemed a lil forced at the beginning but then it went really smooth good job, its hard to write somthing meaningful about somthing u yourself dont experience

The rhymes were too forced in the beginning and you didn't rhymed at all in the end.

I'll give you crdit for the mening behind the whole poem though.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Again your using the same rhymes...bad, sad...really really basic, so many words rhyme really well together and there are dictionaries even to help you out with it!

like this line right here

And i wish he never had
He mad me feel real bad.

i dont mean to sound really mean but this sounds like a 5 year old could have written it kind of the whole "the frog sat on the log" deal going on there...

CLICK CLICK CLICK goes the little light,
Making everything go white

that was my favorite part though, i thought the click click click part was very catchy and clever, good job imma go with a 4/5 cause i think you need to use better words and stuff like that

Jamie no problem love 2 no what ppl really think helps alot x x x

That's fantastic rhyming. Very well done. Unfortunately, there were times it seemed forced, but the poem, the message and everything else was awesome. Giving it a 5 for a good write. Keep it up :)

Wow dis was so gwd.....i reli lyked it....
love dia mwaz xoxo

Ey thats rough