Burning Hart

by Delo   Aug 19, 2005


Love can feel like heaven, it can also hurt like hell.
I can feel my hart burning, burning into ashes.
I hope that one day i will receive your love, your love as your partner.
My hopes are to high, I need to stop thinking about the things that will never happen and start thinking about the reality. Reality kills me deep inside, inside i can feel you, feel you burning my hart to ashes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by I.Lose.It.All

    Wow Deangelo babez thats so good

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    Love the way u pt emotion in ur poems well odne

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    I enjoyed this, you could really feel all the emotions you were going through in the poem, I hope that everything goes alright for you, well done to you and good work
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacinator

    I like the first line :) its so true!

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    This is much better.. i can feel your agony and pain.. perfect! but i hope that this isnt really a true thing... if it is im sry.. keep up the great work tho
    take care of you
    amanda

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