See me, hear me, love me

by Ashton   Aug 19, 2005


I hope you see me.
I hope you hear me.
I hope you notice you are right there next to me.

Why don't you see me.
Why don't you hear me.
Why don't you notice that I am doing these things for you.

Please listen to these words,
These words that really hurt
You are the one I want.
You are the only one I want.
Cus your the best thing that has ever happened to me.

I hope you see me
I hope you hear me.
I hope you notice that I am in love with you.

Please hear these words.
These words i have to say.
You are the one i need.
To save me from myself.

Please see me.
Please hear me.
Please see that i am the one for you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by love2beloved(chels)

    Hi, I love the way you made this poem. The way you're typing it is beautiul and unique, which i fell in love with. Great job and 5/5 Chelsea

  • 18 years ago

    by sarahcide

    Ashton. That was amazing! I could never, ever write poems like you. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tigger

    This was awesome poem. Loved it. talk to you soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by xDestinys Dreamx

    Awww sweet poem hun you obviously love her ... i say try win her back :) good luck always x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    HEY! I love this poem! You have a great story and it doesn't need rhythm as a crutch! Great job!

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