Its good, because it has meaning but it wasn't easy to read, work on the flow, but it was a very sweet poem :D

WOW! This is sooo beautiful. I can defiatly relate too. Your a great writer hunnie keep it up!

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

How cute!!! 5/5! but a better flow and ryme would improve it

Omg!! i luv it i can relate to it i really love it good job 7/5 all the way :)

This was so sweet i hope you showed him this poem i bet he would have loved it. keep up the good work 5/5

Yes it so good to be in love and admire someone so much

Nceily written! i know how this feels so i can easily relate! it was definately worth the read!! good jobe definately a 5/5

Very nice job.. sounds like you love him alot.. maybe just work on your flow a little bit jus a lil choppy but still very nice because you said what you needed to say and it was very heartfelt. Nice job w/ all your poems & sorry it took so long to comment back xox take care xox