CONCEDED

by Chanel   Aug 20, 2005


Looking at your eyes
Seeing your smile
Hearing your voice
Loving you sexy style
In love with your witty sense of humor
Always making me laugh out loud
Understanding everything about you
And appreciating all of your gifts from within
Your intelligent conversations
Keeps everyone wondering
What's your flaws
Love that you're not anyone else
My first love this I'm sure
I don't have time to love anyone else
Because the truth is I'm too in LOVE WITH MY SELF!

Something I just wrote from the top of my head let me know what you think.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Miranda

    Free write good choice

    you should some of my poems some are free write but some are written in deep thought

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    That's original...nicely done...thank you for the comment :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chanel

    Thanks for the comment I enjoyed your poem as well

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    That is really brilliant of you what you put made me think to keep going at yours love lisa