Pain

by asia[imperfection] is alone in the world   Aug 20, 2005


People don't know what i go through everyday
to hear what people have to say
i hide through the smile while i hold all this pain
i am tired of all these thunderstorms with more & more rain
its unbearable to stay here with people who don't care
and people who compare and stare
they don't know and they never will
i don't like to share my emotions
id rather go downhill
do they know me just by staring at me
just when i think all the pain is gone it comes back again
a form of a human that i care about or like
stolen from me
by a girl who thinks shes better than me
i want this pain to end but it wont
why wont it leave me so i can be free
i wanna be happy i wanna laugh
laughter does not come out only tears

i know this might be a corny poem thing but i was upset when i wrote it so please tell me What you think bout it

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  • 20 years ago

    by brit

    Thanks for commenting on my poem :)
    i really liked this poem and all the rest of your writing...you put alot of your feelings in them and thats something that makes them even better. i hope to see some more of your work soon.

  • 20 years ago

    by silence kills

    It was a good poem, as long as you get your feelings out and say what you needed to say, that's all that matters, and you did that wonderfully ^^ and thnx for commenting my poem, much appreciated!

  • 20 years ago

    by Jin

    This is very well written I loved it... keep up the good work!

  • 20 years ago

    by HansRik

    A very good poem indeed. Just lovely. Very powerful and emotive. Keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Razorblade

    I liked this poem. It wasn't corny, it was how you felt!

    -Taylor

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