Night and day

With your arms around my waist
I could never be more safe

I loved these lines...so romantic!
Very good job on the poem, I could feel the longing in each word.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Nice poem indeed ^-^ keep it up

This is a wonderful poem, i like it alot, and thx for the comments

Wow, that was a great write! I really liked it...the simple words and lines were very effective. Keep up your great work, and thank you for your comment on my poem! 5/5

Thanks for the comment on my poem glad someone enjoyed it. Beautifully written by the way keep up the good worK! =)

5/5

Kay