BLOOD

by lifelessdays11   Aug 21, 2005


BLOOD IS EVERYWHERE,
PUMPING IN YOUR HEART,
FLOWING THROUGH UR VEINS,
BUT SOMETIMES WHEN U GET OUT OF CONTROL,
ITS IN FRONT OF YOU ON THE FLOOR.

SOME OF US C IT,
SOME OF US DON'T,
BUT 4 THOSE OF US WHO DO,
WE REALIZE ITS MORE SERIOUS THAN WE THINK.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lifelessdays11

    Thank you all for your comments i appreciate everything...new poems coming up next month or sooner!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Kinda scary but it definately had a great impact.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    So true great job keep it up nice subject 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tyler

    Hey there, I just read ur poem and it's great, I mean talking about inner pain, sometimes people dont wanna see what's in front of them, scared of the truth. the inner pain needs to come out smtimes. Keep it up, I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was really good. i never got bored and its not only cause its short. ur a great writer.

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