Unfaithful friends

by Dreaming_Awake   Aug 21, 2005


I fell so empty inside
by my side is where they should be
where they have gone ill never know
gone are the friends i once had
my friends are nothing more to me
nothing is what my hearts surrounded by
the feeling of hatred comes form within
feelings of remorse and injustice begin
begins the life of broken sorrow
my friends say the\'ll be there today and tomorrow
tomorrow is when ill need them
needing is the feeling that I\'m left with
left behind by my untrue friends
untrue were the words they spoke to me
words they use to cut so deep inside me
cutting to release my self of this world of pain and grief
pain and grief is what i feel now
feeling there is nothing more to life for

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  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Very good and real, i like it! awesome job, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    It was okay, but I don't know. I didn't really like it. I didn't hate it though, don't get me wrong.. I just didn't really like t. Sorry... Also, thank you for putting a comment on my work. I appreciate it much.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    I really liked that...really related to it. the feeling of emptiness and everything. you're friends are probably there..you just need to reach out. well i hope you're ok..take care x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    "I fell so empty inside
    by my side is where they should be"

    so many people feel like that i know i have been there more then once and had friends who were never there. i guess when you really need some one your true friends are there. great poem good subject keep it up your good 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by pag

    Lots of emotions, and many people can relate to it, it's an awsome peom

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