Comments : Rape my mind

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    I really like this poem and i have one kindof like it called love hurts if you are interested
    good job though

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Powerful poem, well done, I liked the form you used to write it and the way you did not restrict yourself in rhyme, It is annoying that you had to put it in profanity, but it is still a good poem and I can tell its supposed to be in sadness, I liked the way you desribed the emotions and the outcomes of what would happen, good work, I liked these lines the most
    "Rape my mind
    Break my heart
    And still know I'll run straight back."

    well done and take care

  • This is really good so simple yet so powerful goood job 5/5
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Very emotional, and vivid poem. Loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow great poem

    Loved it

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ReBecca

    I liked this it flowed real well. but you should never stay in a relationship with a man who abuses you.

  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    I like your writing very well done

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    So sad! ... but i know what you're talking about with the line
    "Break my heart
    And still know I'll run straight back."

    take care, and keep writing!
    xoxoxo