That is a sad poem, but it is realy good.

Really good but sad, i'm sorry but i can't help with the name.. i got nothing but great job and please read my new poem.. "So cold inside" when you get the chance, by the way 5/5

MAbey it just my point of view but i didn't fully get the poem I got some of it but not all but i gave ita 4/5 because what i did understand was excellent

Thats sad...Ya..I cant find what i did wrong either..There isnt always a reason..shit just happens..this is a very emotional poem..i loved it! 5/5! STAY STRONG!

*Nope..Dont know anynames for it..sorry!*

Much Love,
katie

That wuz great............keep it up

Hidden would be the name i give for this poem and i rell like it and under stand and i hope youll read and comment on mine

Hey smile hun :) It's a shame that you hurt so much, maybe things will come right for you soon. Keep writing

How bout lost within? sorry im c**p with titles. but is a brilliant poem xox

Hey babe kwl poem comment on mine if ya get da tym thnx

Wow, the imagery I get from the words you use. Good job on this poem. I can see this in my mind.

It's good to know you're back and writing again. This an amazing write like always. I can't think of a title though sorry. Take care and keep writing xx:

*> : PainOfOne

AMAZING! 5.5!

I really love the poems you make..haha...and uhh..for the title...in my opinion try using "hiding behind tears"....or maybe come up with a title thats associated with the eyes...:D...nyways...a very beautiful poem:p

Great job. wonderful details and i know the feeling. how bout "Can't Leave" or "Hidden behind the Tears" I hope you'll be ok and hopefully talk to ya later. love ya

Just what I expect out of you, Ashleigh, a very emotional, powerful poem. You never let me down...and yet you never surprise me! Surprise me! Write a crappy poem! I would be in shock and awe!
J/p....great job.

Great poem.
1 thing that didnt make it any worse but the line...
"everything i'm is everything I lack"
iaybe if you put i am it would flow better.
still a great poem:)

Jacs
xxx

Wow this poem was really touching...the only thing i didnt understand was the first line in the last stanza....it didnt make sence to me
but still excellent job 5/5

I adore your writting... again well done

I liked this this was really good the first stanza was my favvvvorite i loved it

I cant find nothing

that should be i can find nothing or i cant find anything

great job 5/5

Really good poem, but still really sad.
You've expressed yourself well though. 5/5

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