Comments : Heartbeat in Time

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aw.. thats soo sweet.. awesome job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    :-) This poem's really sweet! I like how you ended this poem, really nice. I like the "brand new start" that you used, its very original!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    Wow.. very good.. 5 stars!

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Great job! It's very unique. I like how you began the poem with quotations.
    -Kate