Very nice poem.keep up the good work.

I love the poem, i have read better but this one is still very good! i love the last line it closes it up pretty well and makes the poem feel complete, because some poems don't do that but your very good at getting it to. gret job putting the emotions through. take care

~Jacklyn

A unique rymeing scheme.
'Hurt lingers on in hearts of those who have lost'
i like that line, very good.
i like this one a lot, it was well detailed without stripping it of the qualities of poetry. the emotion was strong, i loved it! 5/5

Resplendent write, very nice!!!