Isnt love a crazy thing.....i kow how you feel here

That was a really good poem, you described your feelings well! keep on writing and thank you for your comment :)

Very good i wish i could say more but i havent been in that situation

Oh that was AWESOME!! the emotion was there and i can tell how you feel even without being in your situation! and it amazes me you rhymed with every 2 lines and made it still sound awesome, that takes talent!! 5/5

Amazing pome love the flow. but are your sure that this other guy is was you want do you know him well enought to give up the one your with make sure you will be happy wiht you choice before you do somthing you might regret 5.5

Amazing pome love the flow. but are your sure that this other guy is was you want do you know him well enought to give up the one your with make sure you will be happy wiht you choice before you do somthing you might regret 5.5

This poem is great i totoaly relate to it 100% i go trough that all the time. but never have to words to express my self good job A+

Sweet so sweet

Thats soo sweet i think that is a great poem that only you could understand the true meaning of -well done :)

Amazing poem xxx

Ahh what a choice. very good. 5/5

Seems like the poem's name should be my 2 boyfriends minus one.. lol j/p.. good job.. rich with feeling.. i saw a few errors in spelling, but i usually leave those crits out cuz i feel like im nit picking,.. poetry isnt about spelling, its about feeling.. anyway.. the rhyme and flow was pretty good.. but(mainly the last 2 lines of this stanza) kinda had me fumbling with the flow..

We're sitting in my car
I Play a song on my guitar
"Heaven" your favorite one
That night my heart you won

now that i think about it, it may just be in my head.. whoo knows.. just something for you to think about.. just my thoughts.. take em or leave em.. good piece.. 5/5

Svensk? Stilig!

Anyways...(I do not know to what extent you understand Norwegian=) The poem is good enough...

Certainly a story which we all have been through, for better or worse...It has a nice flow, and a pretty cool rhyming scheme...

What I didn't like was the rhymes..some of them seemed really forced, which ruins the flow to a quite big extent...

except from that, good poem..

peace

That was a sweet, emotional poem..

I wish you the best of luck with the person whom you love, try to let your boyfriend down gently though, so he doesnt resent you..

Your poem conveyed your feelings and emotions for this person, he is certainly lucky to have someone care so much, good luck once again

take care
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I donno what to say...it was perfect! one off line, that's all, 5/5

Great poem..5/5 isnt love crazy

I dont normally read love poems, but this was really good, there was alot of emotion and the flow was good. keep it up xxx

Excellent write. Very nice job.

I never read a poem about somebody that has 2 boyfriends...nice! good rhyming, you didnt try to force and words to rhyme. awesome job

Flow is a bit off but other then that nice job...keep t up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-