=( ab thats really sad. but as always well written... i love you xx

Thats great abb i love it...but when is my poem coming..i want,i want i want....(isnt that always what i wanted.....nah that was for you to be happy...)

another good one anyway,if only i was as good...

:( so sad but excellent poem!

WOw that wOz soO sad but really well written with alOt Of emOtiOn. i really like it, yoOh did a Great jOb. thanx fOr da cOmment On my pOem, it means heaps tO me when ppl let me nO wat they think. newaii keep up da great wOrk =]

'ni zhen bang', that was the mandarin version of you're great. Thanks for your comment anyway.

Good poem. it's sad loosing a friend. i loosed on of my best friends not long ago. luv ya

Mysterious start, Brilliant finish.. Great Writing!

Keep Up The Good Work

That was so heart-breaking and full of sad emotion.. i hope ur OK, nothing is worse than having to lose a best friend.. ur rhyme was gr8 and ur choice of words gud.. i especially lyk ur last 2 lines
keep it up
Nannoush

Again the lines are slightly choppy but thats ok
5/5

Awesome....so sad...so deep so much hurt...
5/5
love
amy

I loved your poem and thought it was beautiful, especially the ending... i loved the last couple lines!
xo adge