Awww.....this poem shouldnt be here....it may be a little sad but...its more on love/ friendship....i like the ending btw.."it was nice to know that he does truly care"...nice one there...:D

This is quite sweet....but could use a few revisions...the flow was just a little bit off dont wory that can be fixed in a jiffy! ha well 4/5 good work

I liked it, could use a little formatting, but the content is solid and well passed.

I liked the gentel rhyme that flowed through out xxx