A tribute to my lost love

by daniel jones   Aug 29, 2005


She came and gave me light from a candle ,but i blew it out and rejected her.
she talked when i was sad,i told her 2 be quite and leave.
she hugged me when i shed tears,i moaned and made her tear.
she held me wen i was hurt ,then i hurt her.
she told me she loved me,i broke her heart.

now i\'m sat in the corner,alone and and upset,and i know why.

i see her cry i wipe her tears and she walks away.
i see her hurt i hold her and she pushes me away.
i see her sit alone i sit down beside her,she moves away.

we both walk our different way.

this is where i went wrong but i know that now.

my thoughts when i wrote this where of a person who\'s open hearted love i rejected and now she rejects mine.

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  • 18 years ago

    by +Fouillis+

    I think i read this on ur blog. i love it. its great

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Very sad poem. Well expressed, however, no offense but u did sorta deserve it lol... i guess maybe next time itll be different:P

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by kidyayo

    THIS A GREAT PAIN MAN I FEEL UR PAIN I M LOVING IT