Comments : Mother To Child

  • 16 years ago

    by sexy emmsy

    Awww thats rele sweet bbz ttyl

    lv em xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Great poem...very touching. keep up the good work. 5/5 :)

    * plz try and comment mine too.Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaklynn

    Nice. It reminds me a lot of that poem that compares life to a staircase from a mother to her son...i believe it was by langston hughes...but its still very powerful and original.

    ~JAKLYNN~

  • 16 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Girl i am wordless...........u have such great talent. this poem is so beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem, i love the concern for the family you have in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bertha

    This was a very good poem! i think it's nice to read something about a mother and daughter relationship because i am very tight with my mom..keep writing and congratulations on winning!

  • 16 years ago

    by Inner Critic

    A strong post - lots of hardship and lessons learnt.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mallory

    Awesome moral and backround but it would be so much better if there were rhyming.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    That is a great poem.. it looks like you took alot of time to come up with it.

  • 16 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Great poem, i really loved it, check out Langston Hughs "Mother to Son".
    Keep up the good work. You are in good company. I give this effort a 5 !!

  • 16 years ago

    by kayla

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    I just dont know what to say that is.... oh my god,
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  • 16 years ago

    by monika

    Well there isnt much to say ur obviously a fantastic writer and i fink dat nutin shud stop u from writing dese poems well done!!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by IVY

    I really liked it
    it was like really true

  • 16 years ago

    by ThugBlood

    Hey gurl u a good poet this shit is so true its like u speakin for eva body keep it upu doint well

  • 16 years ago

    by Justin

    Nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    This in an amazing poem you really put your heart in your work

  • 16 years ago

    by Romy Rose

    JJ

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria

    This poem was touching

  • 16 years ago

    by priscilla

    That was something special.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awesome poem......it made me think of how true it is.....we always cross bridges.....its a inspirational poem....keep on writing you have talent!!!