"I've crossed bridges in life
that threatened to fall" i love those lines, because they are so true. about taking chances in life and just hope that it works out for the best! you have a lot of great lines through out the poem. keep up the good work!

~Jacklyn

JJ,
We do have to cross those bridges and climb those mountains and we can't always stay at the top...there will be times we fall. But it only makes us stronger and we learn to survive. Beautiful poem and so true.

hugs, love, Ann

This is tha best poem!! and o so true! keep up tha good work and i hope to hear more poems from you soon

Wow... very inspirational. absolutely wonderful!!! keep it up!
-xXx-

Great job keep up the good work

That gave me a knot in my throat! That gave me tears in my eyes. But it did put a smile on my face because when I read it, more then anything the message I got was you've learned from your mistakes! This was a gorgeous poem JJ and the next time you fall get right back up because you'll still be shining like you are now! Much love to you!
~Chelsey~

There are definately no short cuts in life and no free lunches. Anything worthwhile is always hard work and this poem is so very worthwhile to read. Amazing!

Warm regards,

Steve

Very sweet poem.A great poem about the ups and downs of life .I think it well deserevs a 5

JJ that is an amazing poem and words to live by. Never give in. WoW!

WOW!! Lost at words. Amazing!!

Congrats....dear heart....well deserved.

Love Ann

Good i like it although i dont really understanding it, deep and symbolic.

O....that was a really sweet poem. : )

Cute poem...

Great poem, truely inspiring *smiles* keep the good work. Rosie xXx

I loves this poem as it is so true to all our lives. as we go through life we have to make desions and well they dont always seem to eb the right ones and this tells us of this keep writing i loved it
*huggels*
loves emmie xxxxxx

Well done, in particular I like the last stanza. It is the perfect ending and sums up all that you are writing about.

It really warmed my heart.

Great Poem! Awsome use of words. Sent chills up my spine. Good job!:)

This poem was really inspirational, it makes you think alot about what life is. Your very talented keep it up!